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:iconmiyatoriaka:
Hey you! :icondragonglomp:

Thank you so much for the :+devwatch:! I really appreciate it.


Greez
Miya :icondragonhug:

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:iconperuserofpieces:
Well, you're very welcome! You have amazing artistry and (so far) great storytelling abilities, so you earned it completely!

...I'm still busy watching your adorable icons! ;-)
:iconmiyatoriaka:
AWW thank you very much .///.

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:iconkolorado:
Noticed I never addressed the +watch lol. Thank you so much for the watch/faves and very many thanks for feedback

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I write therefore I am
Sanity is simply the binding of the mind, Insanity is freedom of the mind.
:iconperuserofpieces:
My pleasure! Writers like you make giving feedback extra enjoyable! ;-)
:iconbubblewolf:
Hey there! Thankies for the watch! It really means alot :)!
:iconperuserofpieces:
My pleasure! Your gallery is full of my favorite types of anthros--realistic, thoughtful, and, above all, not perverted. So thank you for that! Just keep the updates coming. ;-)
:iconmelody-hikari:
8O Thank you for taking the time to read my literature and fave it! [Flirting with Disaster]

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In case you missed it, all you nonreaders of signatures, I SAID my avatar/icon is by =Zhampy. Now will you PLEASE stop asking?
:iconperuserofpieces:
My pleasure! It's a shame you haven't finished it. I'm sure you've grown by leaps and bounds as a writer since the last time you uploaded.

Your story is an interesting and unique take on Pokemon in general, and I like that. You stayed away from the already established anime world and focused on creating characters and situations that are entirely your own (are you a fan of BehindtG's Random Doom, per chance?). Character development is one of the key elements to a good story, and you seem to have a little bit of that going on as well.

If you were ever to continue this story, I would suggest making the next chapter completely from Diamondstar's point of view. Give us a taste of what what he thinks of their situation, how his mind works, and especially what he thinks about the cute little Eevee he is now trapped with who seems to have a thing for him, no?

Once again, thank YOU for the pleasure you have given me with this writing. And don't ever be discouraged just because you don't have thousands of loyal watchers waiting in line to read your latest story. Even if your work makes just one other person happy, that should be reward enough.

Thanks again. ;-)
:iconmelody-hikari:
>w< THANK YOU SO much for the kind words. I truly appreciate it.
And I was going based off the Pokemon Mystery Dungeon games. 8D [But there's so little as to why things are banned from caves or how you're restarted! There's so little to all the small important things that I think that's why I can get away with it. XD]

8O Maybe I will~ And it'll help me develop his character a bit more, though I'm nervous about writing from a male's point of view. A lot of the guys I know aren't that male. XD They're not girly, but they're far from being the typical male that I'm used to thinking.

I've also never heard of BehindtG. o_o

Well, I'm sure the more people fave this story and ask for the rest I'll want to finish it. ^^; You're the second person that have recently faved the story and asked for more [Recent=in the past year].

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